Strong words
Your coworker is very satisfied with your feedback. He now asks you to look at another report he wrote for technical stakeholders. You noticed that the writing style is confusing and verbose. You decide to help him use more concrete nouns, and to fix redundant adjectives and run-on sentences.
Can you classify which of the following examples are intelligible, and which ones can be improved?
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Data Communication Concepts
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