Half-empty glass
Your coworker, whom you helped with a project on price predictions in Chapter 2, asks you now to read his report. He wants your feedback as the report is designed for the executive team. Particularly, you should focus on fixing any empty or fat phrase, or colloquialism.
Can you help him identify improvable sentences, and suggest a better alternative?
This exercise is part of the course
Data Communication Concepts
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